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This rather ruins the experience of reading the story in my opinion: breaking the fourth wall which disconnects the reader from the imaginary world they would have built up in their mind, tainting the fictionality of the story with the supposition that these are events that might happen in the real world, and changing the nature of the exposition from a fable into something that might be construed as autobiographical.

[ps you can read my reviews of all the chapters at https://rdmp.org/serials/content/KonbiniIdol.]