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@jxself Another chapter dedicated to the introduction of another extraordinary main character, imbued with history, lifelong scars, and an impossible mission.
The tone of the work is perfectly captured as, 'Their laughter, fueled by cheap liquor, echoed in the night, a fleeting moment of warmth in a galaxy gone cold.'
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I found the meeting with the character's overlords a little too curt; they were remotely present in a room utterly devoid of any ornamentation, but camouflaged to such an extent that the speaker could not be discerned from the group, let alone identified; while the intercourse was telling-- ...
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@jxself
... 'Dissent was not tolerated at his level of the PTSC'--the simple outcome that he had no choice but to extract a dangerous prisoner could have been put across with a little more panache, and perhaps could have given some indication of the reasons--even if misdirected for the sake of the story--for the mission in the first place.
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@jxself
But the development of these main characters is thrilling, and I'm really looking forward to the adventures they are going to have!
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